Кстати не поможет мне кто с переводом одного из абзацев хронокросса?

She was fair with an average build, and wore a silky headband tied around her soft, silky red hair. Today, she dressed in red and blue, a combination that she stubbornly insisted was a perfect match. The blue was a long dress that extended from just above her bosom down to her knees. Had she had her way, she would have kept her upper arms, shoulders and collarbone exposed as such, but her elders felt it too bold by Arni’s conservative standards that she wasn’t permitted, not even in the house, to have that dress on without a proper outer covering. Much to her dislike, she had it worn under a comfortable, red outer dress that she cut and tailored herself. She saw it to that wore like a robe but that it bared her collarbone and revealed much of the flattering blue dress at the front. She made sure that little hatches were precisely cut into the red dress just so she could teasingly yet proudly reveal her fair, smooth maiden shoulders. Her elders had initially refused permission, saying that the change was just as good as none, but Leena would have none of that, insisting that it was her final compromise until they finally gave up, and gave in. Among her other fashion accessories was a sweet jasmine fragrance that she never failed to put on and that she, Serge heard from her, had bought from Termina with several months’ worth of savings.
She always never had the right posture and behavior. She preferred to stand with her feet wide apart, and her clenched fists resting on her hips as she spoke. And when her mood was appropriate, she would straighten her chest and hold her left fist up, as if ready to throw a punch. But really, she was just preparing her pose before exclaiming “yes!” to declare her achievements in all imaginable, as well as unimaginable, circumstances.

Вот вся новелла в одном архиве:
http://letitup.com/5101642bc1

Я думаю, ты найдешь, где там вторая глава

Первую главу и пролог я уже почти перевел: вот они
http://letitup.com/5ac9750c40
Правда я свой труд еще ни разу не вычитывал, поэтому - готовьтесь к "перлам".

Я вчера перевел альтернативную концовку. Содержание супер! (правда сам стиль немного слабоват)
Качайте, ознакамливайтесь и будем решать, вставлять ли ее после эпилога новеллы С.Д, Перри. (концрвку Перри не заменяем, а просто вставляем это после окончания новеллы)
Мне кажется, что у нас выйдет настоящий ШЕДЕВР, который заценят все фаны.

http://letitup.com/3954b6de08

Я думаю, что этот сценарий вам, как и мне понравится намного больше.
С нетерпением жду отзывов.

Ты, кстати, взял себе вторую главу резика 4? Мне браться за третью?

Всех с первым днем Лета!!!!
Рад снова видеть у нас в гостях госпожу Селену! Хотлось бы услышать ее мнение об остальных проектах.

Обрати внимание, если не знаешь: Большой сыр переводится примерно как большая шишка, и речь здесь идет о Б.Мендезе. Будут иные предложения или синонимы - выкладывай! Я почти закончил третью главу. Классно написано. Вот только с географией Пуэбло у меня проблемы, т.к. проходил игру только за Аду.